Hi,
I saw what you did and it is a lot better. I think you will do well on Etsy. I know how you feel about time. I am lucky I have time now but once I start working again I wont have much of it. Most of my jobs are 40+ weeks and finding time to post, photograph, and make things isn't easy. I am laid off right now and looking for a job. This time though I maybe looking for something more part time so that I can still work on my art. I think you have some great things you can bring to your shop.
Best of luck to you.